Don't you think this person sounds very prejudiced and proud?

This is America, where even 'banned books' can be freely read. No one will force you to sit and read something you hate, certainly not me. As to the wording, Elrond was called king in the Hobbit if I correctly recall. If not, again this is MY fiction. Half-king is a term that combines the terms halfbreed and king, as in other stories that use the phrase half-prince when referring to an illigetimate child or half-breed that has rights to the throne How is it, I wonder, that a group of people that are interested in fantasy, become so expectant for facts to be used? That seems a little silly, does it not?



If you cannot go into a movie expecting the book, then you cannot read a fanfiction expecting either the movie or the book. Before any of you that decided this piece was unbearable begin a career in editing, I suggest you work on creative criticism (as well as practical criticism) before starting out in the big leagues. As for me, I will continue to publish my poetry and children's works (yes, I have been published on paper) as well as posting to this and all of my other fictions in progress. I thank you for the time you took to read it, that alone shows that you are a rare breed of individuals still taking in as much knowledge as you can, rather than sitting in front of a mind-numbing game or tv show as the majority of our generation does. you did not come accross as helpful or sincere readers in the reviews. I really wish people would take a more professional attitude when addressing someone. It is so hard that I am a gifted child but no one will appreciate me (athineu)Don't you think this person sounds very prejudiced and proud?
Yes, they sound like a bit of a jerk. Also, nothing here makes sense. Sounds like an author's note on bad fanfic.Don't you think this person sounds very prejudiced and proud?
"decided this piece was unbearable" is that supposed to apply to the prejudice and proud person or to what you're writing?